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Well done
I've waited until the end to comment, since so many of the multi-part stories I've begun, and enjoyed, simply stop. I really was taken by the story, the writing, and the wrap-up. Genuine kudos, and I hope there's more of these stories in you!
Steve
You won't have to wait much longer
My Muse has been working overtime - I'm about 2/3 done with the next idea, so it should be along in a few weeks.
What a neat ending.
It's always good if the doting couple can procreate BEFORE the transition. At least the gransparents get their fulfillment and that goes a long way to placating any discord while removing what is often the biggest obstacle to acceptance within the extended family.
Sweet and Fun
Thanks for the new story. I have really enjoyed reading it
Beautiful story
This is an adorable story. It's unusual to find someone like Sheila for men like Peter. This is one of my favorite stories. Thank you for writing this Ricky.
DeeDee
Very good read
It has been an enjoyable story all the way through it.
Thank you for posting it for our enjoyment.
Very Well Done
This was a great story from start to finish. I think it's gonna get reread soon, now that it's done, so I got a start to finish read.
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Thank you.
T
well done
I'm looking forward to your next story.
Wonderful!
Thank you Ricky for this wonderful story! I'm overjoyed that you have already started on a new one because I genuinely am missing the daily updates to this already.
Polly and Sheila, Russ and Rose, have become real friends to me, and their happy ending has me in tears...
So thank you again.
Lucy xxxx
"Lately it occurs to me..
what a long strange trip its been."
What Everybody Said...
Fun story, great dialogue, sweet ending. Very enjoyable.
Eric
Ricky I really enjoy your writing
This was another, and even better example. You manage to combine lightness and seriousness with just the right balance. I look forward to your promised next one's arrival
I agree. Wonderful!
Thank you for a very entertaining and wonderful story Ricky. Your writing is first-rate. More please.
>>> Kay
End to end
a grand story, Ricky. Enjoyed every page, well done.
Teri Ann
"Reach for the sun."
Mighty fine story tellin'
As this story unfolded, it wasn't hard to see that Sheila and Polly would be the ones Russ and Rose wanted to take over when the couple retired. Those two showed the most interest in everything about the resort, and in the pleasure of helping the guests.
Scott and Irene said a mouth full when they talked about putting their beliefs into practice, when it came to Polly and Sheila. Both realized their only recourse was to love and support the couple's decisions, whatever they be.
I t's a wise mom and dad who realize the fledgling must be allowed to spread its wings and follow the path that must be traveled.
From start to finish, riding along on Peter's journey was fun and a pleasure. It is nice to read a story where the main character is accepted given the changes they undergo. And in the end, gain much more than when they started. It is worth the time spent reading such a nice story with such a happy ending.
Others have feelings too.
Thanks to a "searching for a story" blog
This very entertaining story came to my attention courtesy of a "searching for a story" blog post.
As other commenters have stated repeatedly, the witty banter between the various protagonists quite often had me in stitches! And it really drove the story forward.
This story was all about the initial journey of discovery. So, to me, the conclusion felt in the second half of the last chapter felt rather rushed. But then that was not the focus of the tale.
Thank you!