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Living her best life
Sabrina, I always enjoy spending a little time inside your characters’ heads! Looking for a portal? What a great line. :)
— Emma
The characters in this story
The characters in this story have a little more baggage than my usual, happy-go-lucky, fun-loving free spirits... There was a portal here in New York City a couple of weeks ago. They took it down for weird and suspicious reasons, too bad the world can't accept something mysterious like that, ha... Thank you so much for reading, Emma...
Getting Her Own Back
Sabrina is discovering a new life with Max away from the corrosive influences of Beth and Lula. I really like how Max got her Credit Cards changed so that she would never have to put up with all that bullshit at the supermarket again.
I don't see Max letting Sabrina go.
Choosing teams and back up...
I see this chapter as being the one where Sabrina starts to gather a team, a team of friends. She begins her pick with little Nicole. She feels a little outnumbered with Beth and Lula on one side and her alone on the other. Thank you Joanne for reading...
Yeah, it was fairly obvious……
That Lula and Beth were more than just friends, and Max pretty much verified that. Apparently, I am also not the only one who thinks that Beth is a loud mouthed bitch. Max also verified that - along with the fact that the other two pretty much set the two of them up together while they are off to Argentina having their little affair.
Having the rest of the couples accept Sabrina so easily is very nice - but Max shouldn’t have outed Sabrina to everyone without her permission.
It would serve them all right if Sabrina just walked away from the whole group in a much better place than she was before. Whether that is with or without Max is the question. Plus, the whole thing with Megan is still up in the air.
D. Eden
“Hier stehe ich; ich kann nicht anders. Gott helfe mir.”
Dum Vivimus, Vivamus
No one is missing Beth... it seems...
To me the whole dinner scene was uncomfortable. Having Max with our heroine was the one thing she enjoyed, she was glad to not be her mythical Seventh wheel. I feel she is a little off balance with Lula's friends and that is why she wanted to visit little Nicole. The rest of the story sort of takes a slightly different direction... Thank you, D. for reading...