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A sense of calm
Allison seems much calmer in this chapter. More on an even keel. She’s able to tune in to what Grace and Talia want for (from?) Angie almost right away, and understand that it is right for her. I wonder if Grace is right about pregnancy, though . . . it may be another way in which Allison is unique. At the end, she doesn’t want to think about it more, she wants to feel it. Interesting.
— Emma
How far I pushed her
I'm glad you noticed the difference between this and the previous chapter. And that you pointed it out. I went back and read the previous part and saw how far I'd pushed Allison's distress (distress isn't the right word, but it's near enough.) It wasn't something I was conscious of in the sense of word choice but I was definitely trying to feel Allison's alienation, and tiredness, and "need" as I wrote.
Looking now I see it as extremely present in the writing. Especially how within herself Allison is. At least that's how I see it as the author with the relief of having written this Part 12 as providing something for everyone. Possibly something joyful?
How much all this writing is me reflecting my life in what I'm writing, according to mood and thought, and how much it's what I want to do with the writing influencing me is a scary thought to consider. I think I'll leave it as writing is a very vital thing.