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And there you have it
Thanks for taking us along on this journey. It's a hard genre to do, especially the way it was done here. The main character goes through some coercion and some humiliation but manages to always stand above it all and be a positive force in the lives of others. You handled it with as much grace as Ethan would have. And the addition of the images really brought these characters to life.
Just wondering out loud - how much does Ethan's feminization play into his everyday life? Obviously it has effected him as a person, and he obviously is not hiding that side, but was there a dress or a suit under that graduation gown?
Things I expected that did't happen:
- I thought Ethan's father would appear in the second to last chapter. The title was ominous and you hinted a few times with Colleen wondering about if his father could see him now... Glad you didn't go there. He would have been superfluous to the story.
- I kinda expected Dani and Samuel would be together. Tough guy, tough girl, they probably see each other a lot through his job with Dee Dee.
- Ethan make himself a pair of pants, and they reinforce his femininity - Silky capris, no pockets, zipper in back. Maybe something appropriate for one of Vivian's events.
- I almost expected Ethan to wake up on a flight to Australia and realize it was all a dream (or he could look down at a dress and realize it wasn't)
Anyway, it was a lot of fun to read. Thank you again for sharing it.
Quite the journey!
And they all lived happily ever after. :)
Thank you for sharing Ethan’s crazy adventures with us. You had colorful characters and touching moments, gentle humor and occasional peril — never too much! The writing, as I’ve mentioned before, was delightfully rich without being overbearing— vivid imagery and descriptions that invited the reader into each scene like an old friend.
Take a bow — or a curtsy, if you’re dressed for it — grab a root beer, and kick back for a minute. Savor the success!
Just don’t rest too long, my friend. You have more characters to find, and more worlds to explore.
— Emma