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Little Pink Pills, Part 28
Glad to see a new chapter, Michelle. But I wonder if Carson will have the operation and if her boy/girlfriend will as well. And we STILL don't know his/her name! I say his/her because I don't know if the character sees self as a boy or a girl.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Finally!
Thanks for another episode of "Little Pink Pills". I was wondering if you were going to continue this story. My only suggestion is that this type of story that would benefit from more frequent and /or longer postings.
You have a unique, refreshing way of presenting the first person point of view. It is not something I can just jump into easily. Then, just as I get into the swing of the episode, it ends. Hint, Hint, more frequent or longer posting would solve these issues.
I appreciate your talent, keep posting this.
Hugs,
Trish Ann
~There is no reality, only perception~
Hugs,
Trish Ann
~There is no reality, only perception~
Thanks, Stan, Trish
Thank you both for the feedback.
In regards to my main character's name, well, Stan, it's "Carson." ;-)
Trish... so I should change the very cliffhanger aspect of my story that intrigues you?? Oh, my... now I'm so confused...
(And I'm sorry about the very long delay in posting this chapter. I was dealing with a loss in my family and found LPP too difficult to work on.)
Michelle