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Gee...I would have thought it was because I asked....
....and of course that would be silly! It's because you've written this so well! No tags of magic or transformation, but you turned Vance back into a human being, like I'd hoped (and I expect I'm not the only one?) Troy couldn't ask for a nicer outcome from his grandmother's wisdom, and Vance couldn't ask for a nicer sibling; girl or boy! I'm thankful that this story continues to explore the wonder while staying true to life. Thank you!
Dio vi benedica tutti
Con grande amore e di affetto
Andrea Lena
Love, Andrea Lena
The Bigger Man
RAMI
Tracey through her alter ego of troy proved and showed everyone that he is the bigger man. Yes, man.
Now lets hope that Vance learned something from his little sister. Hopefully, the father and grandfather will not continue to tease Vance, but let the whole thing drop.
RAMI
RAMI
yes! Thank you for having a
yes! Thank you for having a humane character like Troy/Tracey!
grtz & hugs,
Sarah xxx
Thank you!
I really liked How Troy/Tracy acted in this episode it takes a great person to understand the suffer of others who harmed them.
Also the discontinuation of the punishment is the right thing to do morally as the effect on Vance could have mentally catastrophic ( And even if he was misbehaving and acting like a bully, he still didn't deserve that) .
Waiting forward for then rest of the story,
Lily.
Through the years: Troy's Story part 9
Maybe Vance has learned a lesson.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
What A Lovely Child !
Troy/Tracey is a lovely kid - mature, and practically a saint, imho. Pity his /her brother cannot learn from her/him to become a better attempt at a human being.
I have to confess to crying when I read the last bit, which just shows what a good writer you are - I was completely caught up in your fantasy, it was as though they were real people.
Thank you Raff for sharing this work of yours with all of us. Bless you.
Briar
Thank you for reading
I am glad you enjoyed this. I'll admit, Tracy does seem a bit perfect, but as for being a good kid, she is like me. Okay, sure I was no saint, but compared to my brother, I was. In fact, by High school, I used to say that I could do anything, aside from murder, and I would still be the good kid.