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That bitch
Well admiral I'm hoping somewhere in the next 9 chapters Diana has an accident and Christina is not involved.Another great chapter thanks Amy
that bastard
Alek needs a serious, serious reality check. Something like a certain someone telling him to no and meaning it. Of course, anyone who spanked a grown adult against their will using their superior size and strength the way he did should already be doing jail time for assault. I really can not stress enough how disgusting that macho misogynistic patriarchal attitude that he flings around is. Love the story as always, wouldn't be able to hate a character so much if you didn't make the asshole so believable.
Hehe I called it right
I love this story. It's full of surprises and twists and a joy to read.
But I am proud to say I foresaw the Intarweb based furniture business coming
the moment I heard about Andrei's talents and matched it up with Christina's.
Now I have to admit I have no clue what will happen between Christina, Richard
and Diana. I guess we are at the "boy loses girl" part in the story.
At least we know who The Antagonist is.
Biting my nails,
- Moni
It's a girl's world; we just let boys live in it.
If Richard had a clue, he
If Richard had a clue, he would be noticing the smarmy comments made by Diana towards Christina and put a stop to it. But what do you do ----- Men! Janice Lynn
Clueless Richard
Considering the fuss Richard just went through to "get" Christina, he's acting pretty clueless about Diana. Wonder if he IS sleepign with her "for old times sake." Will one of his friends or acquaintances, or a wife, call him on the carpet for how he's treating his girlfriend? Yeah, and Christina needs to somehow remind her uncle that she is an adult and he's doing the same thing to her that he did to his daughter.
Great job on the partnership.
woody
Top Dog V.S. Under Dog
The struggles of the under dog (Christina); may have lost count but hasn't Christina ever won any of the skirmish between her and the top dog (Diana). Only 9 chapters left? Wow, wishing there were more? Feed the need of the demanding selfish audience. Keep up the good work!
-Sanneio
damn
You really do play with the emotions don't you Admiral. Classy telling but I have to say that Christina really needs to get some..ah, balls (no snickers). She's being far too wimpy here. Richard, Diana and Uncle Alek all need a reality check or I'll disown her from the Kristina club... yeah well she spells it wrong. So where's the next bit? I really wonder just who you are Admiral old son. You write too well.**raspberries** Don't stop though.
Kristina
I'm still wondering how
Tina is going to reconcile the real problem she has, being a boy, or is this going to run to Vol 2? (hint hint).
Angharad
Angharad
I'd kind of forgotten that little detail
Seems almost like Christina has too.
Will be glad to see Diana fall
I can't believe there's only nine chapters left! How will it all get tied up?
I can't wait to see Diana get hers! Such an unlikeable woman!
Great story, Admiral!
This chapter reminds me ...
... of how I felt when my daughter came home from middle school in tears. By teaching her to be straight-forward in all of her dealings, she was unprepared to handle the emotional game-playing the other girls engaged in, and couldn't understand why they just didn't say what they meant. As a result, I think I've made it difficult for her to play on the same field as women like Diana, now that she's grown up and in college. Unfortunately, like my Elizabeth, Christina lacks the years of feminine "fencing" required to learn to deal with manipulating bitches in any way other than by laying her cards on the table.
However, since I'd rather my daughter stay honest and true to herself, I'm glad she grew up not knowing how to play games with other people's emotions. And I don't want Christina to learn the skill at all. It's one of the worst things society has done to women -- turning being a manipulative bitch into an asset instead of a moral failing.
So if Christina can't take her to task, I guess it's up to Diana to tip her own hand in such a way as for block-headed Richard to see her for what she truly is. I just hope it happens soon -- Goddess, she is just so awful!
Spank her quickly, Admiral, sir. She's making my gender look bad! *grin*
Randalynn
Remember
Edeyn Hannah Blackeney
Dump Him
Hello All
If I was her I would tell him were to go, I would do it with her standing there, "You make up your mind, Her or Me you can't have both" then I would just tell him to forget it and walk out. She didn't want him to start with so whats the big deal he will leave her alone now and she or he can get on with his new life. Chris should look deep and make up his mind is he Chris or Tina. With only Nine Chapters left something will happen so that they all learn who she really is. Well I have said my 2 cents worth.
Hugs and Kisses
Melissa Ann
Hugs and Kisses
Melissa Ann
43
I’m gonna go out on a limb here and be somewhat critical of this chapter – for a couple of reasons it didn’t seem quite up to the high standards of the previous ones.
I think the main thing that felt a little wrong was Diana’s actions. She says it best herself somewhere near the end of this chapter – “I don’t have to do anything,†yet she seems to violate that principle too often in this chapter for someone who’s obviously pretty sharp. Specifically it would be that bumping business during the jog/run/race. I would think that a few acid tongued barbs from a pro such as herself would be enough to do the trick in getting the better of Chris and wouldn’t run the risk of someone seeing her doing pushing of her own.
Likewise, her later revealing of her plans (or no-plan as it may be) to get back Richard seemed a bit more like a Bond villain’s spilling of the beans to show off (see evil overlords rule #6) than a smart lawyer playing it close to the vest – “I have no ulterior motives†and keeping Chris guessing as to what is really going on.
Also, Richard seems to have had somewhat of a lobotomy in the recent past – having one’s ex-girlfriend stay at your house when he already is quite aware of the feelings of one’s current girlfriend about her seems a monumentally clear thing to avoid at all costs (wasn’t there a chapter on more or less this very subject just recently?). I figured he’d know better
Lastly, and I’m on a quibbly roll here, is the furniture selling business. Its all great, but I’m just wondering how much furniture an unknown could sell over the internet just through pictures. I’d think people would want to see it first to make sure of the quality – to see that its not particle board with some nice veneer on top.
Of course I say all this without mentioning all the wonderful things to be found too – Andrei and Chris ever deepening relationship, Mr Conrad’s tiny piece of goodness, Alek’s difficulties in moderating his behavior and attitudes to his growing up children, and Chris difficulties in figuring out a future that he wants and that is possible.
A new reader to the story
Dear Admiral,
I have with a lot of joy downloaded your story, but am not yet done with reading all parts. But I have got so found of them that I check every day for the next published part. When I have read all of them I will come back with a better formulated answer to the question: Why do I love the story? Until then I will most certainly download then as soon as your fingers can type them down.
I just have a small question: Have you ever thought of adding a picture to the stories? At least I would like to have a different picture for each part (of circa 500 pages) that I copy into a stand alone harddisk to save material that I do not want to lose if my coputer HD would fail.
As I have not been able to identify the towns I might use some pictures from a small town in the Rocku Mountains that I made myself while visiing the area of west Colorado some years ago.
I wish you good writing
Ginnie
GinnieG
Next Chapter WHEN???????
Admiral C. - Are you back to health so we can get that chapter you have promise? Richard
Richard
Krunch is Writing
as well as trying to carry on real life. Christina Chase will be written and posted as he can afford to do so. We must be grateful for the fact he was able to write as much as he did and release as fast as he had. Thats no longer the case now. But he will be continuing Christina up to Chapter 52.
BigCloset TopShelf
Amazing read
You are very self deprecating in all your comments Admiral, and I will say I did not get hooked the first time I started to read this but I sure did this time. Have read the whole story to here in two days, and that is a huge amount for me. It is interesting and amusing to see all the comments of readers who are all so emotionally involved in this story and I must say I am one of them now.
This story is so gut-wrenching and intense that once it has its hooks in you it doesn't let go. I have rarely read characters who have seemed so real. We don't read the story we experience it image by image. This story has a lot of power and you should be proud of it Admiral.
There still are a lot of misused words and/or misspellings, but that does not detract from the story. It is not laborious and the real meaning is always apparent. I truly love this story even if I am so late to the scene.
Hugs, Kristi
Kristi Lynne Fitzpatrick
To be honest....
... I have a serious issue with Christina being portrayed as so submissive. It's time she stand up for herself. No family is worth that kind of abuse.
Spanking ?
Well ... I just have to say that when spanking is involved, I am like totally ON!
In anticipation of the new chapters coming out, I had started reading the whole story again and got to Chapter 14. Then, the new chapter came out today so I skipped to Chapter 43, which is after the aforementioned um spanking. So, now I shall have to go clear back to Chapter 15 and read until I encounter the "Spanking event".
To me, spanking means that someone cares enough to protect you, but lightly ! :)
Needing to be spanked.
Gwendolyn
That feeling . . .
. . . I was in a relationship in my mid twenties with a 32-year-old. Unlike our heroine, I had an advanced degree and a professional job. But I still felt like a kid at the adult’s table in many ways. Eleven years is a much bigger difference— especially when the younger partner is barely out of their teens. I hate to say it, but Diane may actually have a point.
I could see this going either way, and being a terrific story. So I’m really interested to see where the good Admiral steers it!
— Emma