The revelation at the end of chapter 1 that he actually wants to be the idol girl doesn't really seem to fit with the rest of the story. As it's written, the story would be better if he was unaware of his own desire or was legitimately against becoming a copy of her. If you want to keep his secret desire as it is, I really feel it needs a few more references either in how he acts when alone, what he thinks, or how things are playing out at school. As it is, the big reveal at the end of chapter 1 feels alien to the rest of the story.

That was a surprise, given how chapter 1 ended I expected to see more makeup first.
Him having an unconscious model's prowl seems to suggest some mental changes, not just physical changes to go with his own self image.

I understand Landon is slowly becoming to look like Christy Marquis, the model, but I am now wondering if he will eventually change in every aspect as well and actually become physically like her? Everything seems to be pointing that way.

I'm Loving this story, but a quick question....

You mention that Landon is starting to gain the body of "Christy Marquis, the model", is this someone REAL, or just in the story? Tried Googling that name, and it did not show any models. If it's a real model, can you at least post a link to her photos?

Thanks!
Sapphire