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Good way of ...
... setting up for Steven to have Stephanie outings after the 11 days, all through the rest of the winter and spring. She can be just as involved with the wedding preparations as a real girl would be. I'm surprised that Mom and Dad weren't more surprised and/or upset at his promise; I doubt whether they had him doing anything after the 11 days in mind when they made the "You can't refuse to do anything a real girl would do." rule. On the other hand, Steven did notice that there seemed to be way more girls' clothes in his closet than would be needed for the 11 days; maybe Mom has a secret agenda?
I would have thought that after being so nice to Robin with such a thoughtful gift Stephanie's niceness and consideration for others would have had her saying, "Of course I'll come to your party if Mom says it's OK." instead of her sulking because she was made to go.
Congrats! I think I like this story better than the original.
BE a lady!
Where did this punishment really come from?
Leigh Richards
Sorry for being dense but where did the orgional idea of becomming a girl as punishment come from. Do his parents really want another girl? Why? What terrible thing did Steven do to warrant his family murdering him. Jeez! Must have done something awful.... I am confused!
Is he really a girl and the family has kept that from him and is getting him warmed up? Or are they a demented family from HELL who delight in putting their son through this torture?
All this just because he peeked at a gift? Aw! Come on!
What is really going on?
Leigh
Leigh Richards
steffie.#3
sounds like fun i want to know what all he did to get in all this truble like every one i smell a set up hum eather mom or his aunt or some one wants him to switch and ill even bet not back from girl to boy or was that boy to girl owell just fun nixt he gos postal?.
ok i just droped in .oldhippie60s@yahoo.com
mr charlles r purcell
verry good story i wood love to see a lot more of this all i can say is wow verry good thanks for shareing
it's not the bird
it's the cage it comes in. Seriously the genre of, I don't even have a name for it, forced fem seems kind of harsh, soft forced fem? Anyway, the whole genre doesn't make much sense unless it takes place in its own fictional version of the world. Well all fiction does that, but you know, lots of stories make sense, if you heard about it happening to your neighbor you'd believe it, it's at least possible in the world we live in. but in these kinds of stories the antagonist doesn't need a logical reason. They can pretty much pull off gross violation of the protagonist and not be crazy, depraved, or evil. I have to admit that it's always confused me as well. Please keep in mind I haven't read the story, just followed the title of your comment here, so I'm not, at all, saying anything negative about the story, or these stories in general. I don't like them but, that's my preference. I keep writing things and erasing them cause I don't want to offend anyone who is a fan of these stories, since I really, really do think live and let live is the best policy. Anyway, this is just intellectual noodling ok, so if I offend anyone it's not intentional. My theory is that these kinds of stories are a kind of intellectual loophole for it's fans and writers. It reverses shame involved in transgendered behavior while encouraging those behaviors. The main character is "forced" to cross dress, learn to behave feminine, etc. The compulsion is external instead of internal so the shame, or perhaps guilt is a better word since the protagonist may be strongly ashamed, is placed on the shoulders of the bet winner or punisher. In contrast real "Forced Fem" stories seem to me to be more a subset of BDSM than anything. Ironically what I would consider true Forced Fem stories are often more "real" in so far as the fictional world they are set in lines up more closely to reality. People in one can do things that would be cruel or atrocious in the real world, but are not in that fictional setting. In the other they due them because they are cruel and atrocious people doing cruel and atrocious things. I have to admit my understanding of these stories isn't helped any by the fact that you can't really pigeon hole a lot of stories. I don't usually like any kind of forced fem, but have seen a few brilliant subtle uses of it in stories that I thought were very good and believable. There's a lot of crossover between the infinite subsets of TG fiction. :)
JL
Hoping my rambling, which I enjoyed, didn't upset anyone.
not a murder
It's not really that extreme. Nobody's being murdered. Steven's parents were just really frustrated with his behaviour and didn't know what to do, and they hadn't intended the experiment to last beyond the intial eleven days. (Steven's assessment that there were too many clothes for eleven days was mainly his failure to appreciate how many outfits a girl goes through in a day, and not a clue to any sinister plot.)
There's a conversation between Michelle and Stephanie that I was going to put in a later installment that would get at some of her motivation for suggesting the whole Stephanie thing, and I think I can stage it in the next epsiode and still make it fit naturally.
Suna down there noticed the key line. This story is basically about growing up, so I suppose you could say the boy Steven is "dying," but only in the same way all children do when they metamorphosize into adolescents.
This piece earned me more votes than anything else I've written, so maybe I should have stayed out of the discussion and just let each reader see what you want to see in it. But I can't help wanting to defend my story. So if you're enjoying something in this serial other that what I meant to say with it, feel free to ignore this comment.
Had to laugh when dad said
Had to laugh when dad said
“It’s very bizarre if what it takes to make my son a man is to put him in dresses, but I won’t argue with what works.†He shook his head confoundedly, and they drove the rest of the way in silence.
Wonder how he's gonna feel when s/he stays forever...... what works may work TOO well...
Stephanie's Deal-3 Very Thought Provoking
The nightmare where Stephanie was truly becoming Stephanie would upset any young man. My question that I think will be answered in time is whether or not Stephanie is here to stay. Will Stephen decide that he wants to be Stephanie?
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Oh my!
That poor boy had such a horrible nightmare, I pray this is not in his future, because if it is, then that's just one more wicked family that I want to kill.
I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Transgender, Gamer, Little, Princess, Therian and proud :D
I am finding this story to
I am finding this story to be most interesting. Steve/Stephanie is trying to do what he perceives what a real girl would do in various situations, and does not understand how his actions or comments are or going to affect him later. I do believe his sister would rather have a sister than a brother and she is going to push hard to make that happen.
I really hope this story line continues to the very end and does not "drop off" to quickly leaving us all wondering how it will end. J-Lynn