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Interesting
If a bit gruesome, a different take on a coming out story?
Woah! Cool.
Savannah Mann just posted the last chapter of UEI (Unknown Entity Intervention), a story I have been eagerly following. And the very next post on BCTS is this, the start of a new story that I suspect I will be following every bit as eagerly.
Life is good. Thank you for posting this.
While it is a necessary plot twist for him to dress up
.. personally I think the women members of the force would have a fit over being considered less than their peers in willing to take on danger, I know I would.
But, meh.
True but...
Just think of the PR Disaster if said female officer was murdered.
{that's my excuse and I'm sticking to it}
Samantha
cool start !
look forward to the rest of the story!
Coming out from under cover
Loving this story so far. Can't wait for the updates. Well done
Willow
Willow
The one advantage
I can see for him doing so (other than nominally circumventing the Brass' decision) is that if he gets captured and his "secret" comes out, it may confuse things enough to give him a brief window to act. Especially if the killer is (or killers are) very ritualistic about it.
Of course, if it all goes tits up then the body will be easier to identify.
Jorey
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I don't think a story as dark as your prospect
of tits up would do well on this site (giggles). But yes, that would seriously put a spanner in the works for the killer(s), if s/he (they) had to remove unexpected body parts.
In any case I have to agree with Samantha. Caitlin aready hinted at having volunteered (so no lack of confidence or courage there), but the top level refused. On the other hand the only "safe" bait would be a very realistic hologram that responded as if natural. Psychopaths can develop unexpected cunning and strenghth.
Monique S
A chainsaw? while alive?
Great start to a very interesting story Samantha. Can the week go fast enough until the next Monday posting.
Karen
Te-he
I had to add a little bit of 'gore' to get the readers interested. For the more squeamish reader, there really is very little violence in this story.
Samantha
Where oh Where are you going?
I hope this is not more dangerous than is acceptable.
Gwen
PR nightmare
A policeman getting killed and the public would understand those were the dangers of the job. But a policewoman getting killed and the public would have a fit that a woman was allowed to be put in such a dangerous situation.
Caitlin is going to be shocked when her partner walks in to meet her at her watering hole. All she will see, at first, is a good looking woman enter the place, while she keeps looking for her partner to arrive.
Others have feelings too.