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Steve's family was truly a
Steve's family was truly a messed up dysfunctional one, starting with the grandfather, but Ingrid was really messed up probably because of her childhood. She couldn't stand what her husband became but she had no qualms about screwing up her sons life.
I'm Amazed
I think this (and your other stories posted here) are great fun, and very well written. You have a decent readership, so presumably others like them too and yet you get very few comments, which I think is a great shame.
BC denizens should be encouraging you to post more here.
Perhaps Ingrid was kind of mentally stunted by her childhood experiences. I don't think she was intentionally cruel to Steve, although she may have been testing him. If so, it's had the opposite effect!
I do hope he doesn't assume the role of Lady Mayoress. Danger, Steve Robinson!
An unsuitable job for a woman...
That really made me laugh! I was not at all surprised to see a subtle PD James reference, after all Steve was a fan of Terry Pratchett's in one of the earlier chapters.
Your stories are all clever, well characterized and great fun. Thank you for writing such an excellent set of stories.
I look forward to the next one with anticipation.
Lucy xx
"Lately it occurs to me..
what a long strange trip its been."
So clever,
such a very well written story. Please continue this one! I can hardly wait to see what is decided, personally I would love to see Steve posing as the Mayoress and exposing the Mayor for the slime he is. I love the whole story arc of Transformations, it is a very interesting, interconnected story.
Wonderful story
That was very well done, good character development and engaging storyline. Sometimes the details would be a bit more than I needed, especially the bridge play, but even that was well done and I could always skip over a paragraph or two if I felt things were dragging. Overall I score this one highly and bookmarked for a later reread (especially if I am ever asked if I know anything about bridge).
P.S. I too am surprised by the lack of comments and kudos. Should be triple the numbers in my opinion.
>>> Kay
Looking forward
I’m looking forward to reading a new part of the Transformations saga. You really should be getting far more kudos for your interesting stories.
Hooked
I’m hooked on your vivid characters and exciting situations. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I’m hoping that Treacher’s offer is going to result in more drama and escape into another world.
Cheryl pinkwestch
Hooked
I’m hooked on your vivid characters and exciting situations. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I’m hoping that Treacher’s offer is going to result in more drama and escape into another world.
Cheryl pinkwestch