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OMGG, That is some cliffhanger…
That is some bl**dy cliffhanger! I can't believe it is Simon yet. Maybe it could be that his car was stolen, and it is a possibility that the "passenger" is His Lordship.
For both Cathy's and Stella's sakes I hope this is a case of Mistaken Identity or just an assumption on the part of the fuzz.
Gabi,
(hoping that Ang couldn't be sooo callous.)
Gabi.
How Can I Be Expected to Sit on the Edge of My chair until
the Next Part?
This is 'cruel and unusual' as the Yanks have it. Still, I'm enjoying it a bunch! Thanks again, Ang!
Yours from the Great White North,
Jenny Grier (Mrs.)
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Yours from the Great White North,
Jenny Grier (Mrs.)
Just a thought
I'm curious.. do you have "car jackings" over in Britain? That's where some bloke sticks a weapon in your face, pulls you out of your vehicle and then drives off with it?
This serial reminds me more and more ...
... of the ones I used to watch as a very young boy at the Saturday matinees. Each week the hero (Tom Mix or whoever) would get into some desperate fix at the end of the 15 minute episode then the next week, in one bound, he would be free. Dick Barton on the radio was similarly good at finding escapes from impossible situations.
I suppose we can't blame Angharad for playing with our affections for her characters. It must be fun for her to alleviate her boredom by teasing us. It's rather like history is defined by one of the pupils in Alan Bennet's play/film 'The History Boys' - 'It's just one fucking thing after another'.
I suppose if it was boring we wouldn't be reading it every day. Just remember, folks, it's only a story - no real people or animals were injured in the writing.
Geoff
Well thanks a lot
you all. You wanted for her to write more, and so she did. And are we happy with it? Nooo.. It's bloody awful, that's what it is. Geez, all I wanted was a nice comforting lovely end to it, hopefully with some sort of 'and they lived happily ever after...'
( Repeat after me: ) "Angharad, we're sorry for pressuring you to write more EAFOAB."
Please don't have it end like this. I like happy, slobbering, sob stories, with a happy end to give warm fuzzy feelings and dopey smiles.
Jo-Anne
We Must Remember One Bloody Thing!!!
Simon might not have been in the car. Remember in an earlier chapter that he was with his step mother. He can be with her and the car stolen from the bank.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Geez not again
I'm beginning to wonder if you and Bonzi aren't up to creating a replacement torture for waterboarding.I can see the headlines now is making the terrorist detainee's read "easy as falling of a bike" a violation of the geneva conventions. Lol Amy---"May your pen never run out of ink and your brain out of ideas"
I know
Tired and needing a fill up he stops and leaves the keys in as he heads in to pay... then a couple of opportunistic kiddies decide to have some fun in a swanky car. Well... could be.
Kristina
Hmmm...
So Simon's Step Mom is dead, and he's in a bad way (passenger)?
Some kids decided to take simon's car for a joy ride and got more than the bargained for?
Time will tell.
Looking forward to seeing how you resolve THIS plot twist.
Annette
The last line is really a
The last line is really a hoot.
Two men ? Over 100mph ? was Simon's car stolen ?
Cefin
ancient episode!
And 376 is online and available for anyone to look at.
But WOW, till I looked at the episode number I was more than a bit concerned.
I'm happy to see new readers discovering EAFOAB
Angarad has over 3000 episodes available here. Start reading at episode 1, and don't stop until they are finished.