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New Author
Hi, this is my second posted story, I did a fan fiction a while ago regarding Leslie Moore's Wildcats on FM. This is going to be in 10 parts, and they are all done. I have reviewed many stories on here and would like to know what my favorite authors think. This first part is just a little background. Things rev up soon. Dee
DeeDee
Dana's just one of the girls
...and she LOVES it! And I can't think of much sweeter or more comfortable than the times I've been treated like this by female friends. Nice beginning. Welcome, new author!
~hugs, Veronica
for the axe had convinced them that because his handle
was made of wood he was one of them.
Thanks for the comment, Veronica.
I appreciate your nice feedback. Dana is headed towards the ‘rabbits hole’ of cross dressing. Hold on tight.
DeeDee
Tip of the Dana iceberg...
Wow, if this is one-tenth, I am really looking forward to reading the whole thing. The one improvement would be to hear more of Dana's thoughts and feelings. I could have died with the events at the sorority. Was the platonic friendship due to another part of Dana yet to be revealed?
Hugs, Jessie C
Jessica Connors
Good Observation
Good point Jessica, Dana opens up much more as he soon gets busy with life.
DeeDee
Belonging
Wish I had spent my time in college as an honorary sister.
Love, Andrea Lena
Good Start
I like how you started by giving us a very detailed account of the development of the character and who/what might have influenced him. He led a full and active life growing up with 2 brothers and sisters yet he managed a very close relationship with his mother who seems like she has been the strongest influence. He is happiest amongst women and likes feminine things so let's see how far he goes.
He eventually goes all in
His father is not mentioned but was a very good man. But he was a WWII vet and closely guarded with his feelings. Dana was a classic middle child, not prone to the excesses of his older siblings, but very competitive. Once hooked on wearing women clothes, it became an integral part of his being. Thanks for the comments Jules.
DeeDee
What a wonderful start.
I stumbled upon this story by chance. And I fell in love with it. I have to say your prose is so sweet and alluring, your pacing is amazing and fluid. I see a little of myself in Dana and I want to see were he or should I say she will go in this crazy world. It looks like I have a lot of reading to do, thank you Dee for sharing this wonderful, and charming chapter with us. I'm looking foward to chapter 2.