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This story just got bolded in my list.
A year or two ago I started maintaining a list of the BCTS stories I wanted to read again some day. Eventually I had to start bolding the ones that I especially wanted to read again since there were so many stories that I could no longer find the ones I was thinking of in my list. I just applied a bold font to this particularly.
At the end of part 1 Diane said "Hope to have the remaining portion up in just a couple of days." I am really, REALLY hoping that the "remaining portion" part is about as accurate as the "couple of days" part. Because I would really love to see more chapters of this story. And if there are many months between each chapter then I can live with that. A well written story that gets published eventually is SO much better than one that gets published quickly to satisfy the readers. As good as chapter 1 of this story was, I think chapter 2 is much better because Andy is now interacting in a very meaningful way with a number of girls online and from class, when he started out with only having one good friend.
I really hope that things don't go badly when his real life and on-line friends find out what's been going on.
On a side note, I found it funny that when the topic of cheerleaders came up in this chapter I kept thinking of the Cheerleader series with Lee Corcoran, which I have read so many times. (OK. I've only read the tenth book twice so far.) It took me a while to suddenly remember, oh, right. They are by the same author.
Yay, Daring Diane. You are awesome. Thank you for the chapter.
Interactions with girls
I have to wonder, if Sandy or one of the T girls are Martina. He'd be reacting with them in more than way, totally unawares.
Yay!
Glad to see the continuation here! I love the concept and like all of your works it's well written! Hope to see the next part soon!
Darn
I hope the wait isn’t as long for the third chapter it was getting really good. I wonder what the next step is going to be earring, makeup, lingerie or just clothes. I bet one of the girls at the party is Martina.
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
Andy's already had several
Andy's already had several awkward encounters around people he knows (both virtually and IRL). That will only accelerate unless he comes clean. His parents are going to have to notice something eventually, and this relationship with Martina is eventually going to come to a head as she guesses the truth (Lars might eventually guess as well, having seen a similarity between Martina and the Red Knight that is not readily explained).
And on it goes
I have been looking forward to this since i finished the last chapter :)
It is nce to have Marina as the "female Sidekick" after Viktor as the "male sidekick" in the last chapter and i look forward to finding out, who they are (if it is revealed).
I would be realy interested in finding out, how Andys parents (or mother espacially, as fathers as normaly quite.... slow on the uptake) react to the changes. A litle bit was described in the last chapter, but i would imagine, that his demanor, while unnoticed in school, would be noticed by his mother, as he cannot "vanish in the croud" at home.
None the less, another story i have to track aside from Cheerleader, Drews Leighton, Panty Club and so on.... ;)
Imagine what it would be like, if they were from several different authors -.-
Looking forward to the next Chapter.
Best wishes from Germany :)
Rado
any hints on an ETA for the next book?
This is an amazing story, really love it
I just read parts 1 & 2 ...
... and this is proving to be one of the best "slow transformation" stories I've read. I'm not a gamer (old dog new tricks kind of thing) so I'm learning things, too. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to part 3.
BE a lady!
any hints on an ETA for the next book?
This is an amazing story, really love it
It would be great if it would teach Portia and Martina martial arts
Way back then
For sure, we thought that Portia were a gonner.
What a nice surprise to see her gaming on. Andy has been surprised at his own behaviour, will it be long, I wonder, or even ever, that he realises how much Portia he has adopted. The special award seems specially designed to bend the personality of the winners, this must have occurred to the designers and programmers. Well, at least Andy is getting some girl friends out of it, just hope he doesn't lose his buddy.
Teri Ann
"Reach for the sun."
Oh, wow!
Just loving this, definitely more please!
Oddly (ironically?) I read this the day after having my nails done for the first time in over six months, due to Covid restrictions. Lock-down; shut-downs (nail bar closures) and, lucky me, seven weeks in France, followed by two more weeks of imposed self-isolation, something had to be done! So off I went to my favourite, friendly - now fully Covid-compliant - nail bar for a full set of acrylic, shellac-finished claws (if "claws" covers mildly overlong rounded tips) in a neutral soft pink. High gloss!
"By the way", I asked, "what is that colour called?"
"Bubble Bath"
Made my day! Keep it coming, please!
Stillian
You have my attention
This is not usually my type of story, but something caught my attention and I decided to read it. Boy am I glad I did. It is very well done. The slow pace allows for good character development. The slow transformation of the main character is done subtly piece by piece. By the end of this chapter it is obvious that others are starting to notice. Going from a wall flower to someone noticed can have negative consequences, but he has been trained to be lady like. This will be interesting. Thank you for sharing it with us. I look forward to reading the next chapter when you get it done.
Keep Smiling, Keep Writing
Teek
(Teek's Author Page)
Parties
Andy will need to calm down a lot before the next party - at this point, he was constantly on edge, worrying about discovery.
It doesn't help that he's having to maintain three distinct personas: Andy, Portia, Red Knight. Coming clean to Martina about the Portia / Red Knight link would help, but at some point, revealing he's a boy IRL might help things.
As for an ETA on Part 3, Part 1 was released at the end of May and Part 2 at the end of September, so if Diane takes as long to write Part 3 as Part 2 (bearing in mind she's probably also writing Cheerleader 11 and likely some other job IRL), then we'll see it drop at the end of January (maybe later given Thanksgiving, Christmas and New Year fall into that period).
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
accessories
I'm surprised Andy didn't feel the need to get a dress and heels to be able to get the movements down properly. Maybe he'll have to when Portia starts learning to dance.
Can’t believe I have only just found this.
I usually check several times a week for my favourite authors to see if they have added anything. But this one slipped by me for 6 whole days.
Thank you Diane but more soon please, pretty please.
Joan
Valleys Girls
Love it so far!
And can't wait for the next installment. I assume this will eventually be published! Can't wait!
Aine
I'm really glad
I tried this one, it is wonderful. I do hope there are more chapters on the way. A very nice slow decent into femininity, can hardly wait to see what happens next!
My reread has got me thinking....
It wasn't clear if Victor and Martina were online at the same time. Could it be possible that they are both Tori. It will be interesting to find out. Now that Cheerleader 11 is out maybe we'll get another chapter or maybe a whole book! Please Miss, may I have some more?
Aine
Miss, may I also have some more?
Of this story? Of Cheerleaders? Of Bully Boy?
Diane Daring writes so much awesome stuff.
The question....
Definitely, this story, but I'd also like more in The Bully Boy series. I think with 11 cheerleaders that can have a break for something else. Just my opinion.
Aine
Lovely
This is simply lovely, any chance it will be finished? :)
Andy doesn't quite get it
Andy seems quite oblivious to the feminine direction his life has taken. His attention to details in his own life, including hair, nails, and most importantly, his attention to what his female friends are talking about has unexpectedly made him quite desirable to the opposite sex. The fact that no one said anything about his nails doesn't mean everyone didn't observe them. The person(s) behind Marina and Victor are sure to surprise us. I'm wondering if the "Victor" character is actually on of the current females in Andy's life.
DeeDee
Impressive storytelling.
Impressive storytelling. Clear characters and plot line. As with the first, so many ways this could go. Only time (hopefully not to much of it, tho) will tell.
Great story so far
What happend to the rest?
Happy
Next steps
I really looking forward to the next steps that Portia takes. Interested in whether it will be lingerie, clothes, makeup, jewelry, shoes or something else like practicing dealing with boys or maybe dancing. I hope we get the next chapter soon it’s been almost 5 years. We need another reluctant princess contest it produced some of my favorite stories, this is one of them. One of the girls is definitely Martina.
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
I guess this is another...
To languish on the vine never to be finished! Bah! I really enjoyed what I had read. So many good stories left unfinished!
Aine
Virtual princess
I asked her about in February she said she is planning on working on it but couldn’t give me a timeframe
hugs :)
Michelle SidheElf Amaianna
Thank you...
For that information. At least there is now hope for this one. I have so many I'd like to see continued, like the MORFS stories by Ray D. or his GLOO'd story or New Life. Or MORFS in general, Grey and Rosetta. So many good stories left waiting. Pete Shrine said he was going to get the site back online, but still hasn't. Bah!
Aine