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The final tune
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mlwJTzlXJVg&list=RDmlwJTzlXJ...
Moving beyond words
Steph, you have me sat here sobbing, not a unique experience, as you have written some painfully moving scenes over the years, but this was quite probably the one which topped them all, starting with that description of Neil's aching loneliness and isolation this would be the last breakfast I would eat with Maddy
Thank you Steph for this thread in the wonderful tapestry of your world.
Lucy xx
"Lately it occurs to me..
what a long strange trip its been."
Painfully moving?
This was raw.
And beautiful, thank you!
“Fuck, yeah!”
wonderful !
Edit
On a read through, I felt I hadn't done enough justice to the music, so I've done a small edit.
You had
You had already made it almost unbreathably poignant, but the edit takes it up to a whole new level. Quoting that last line of the McColl....
Sorry but I genuinely can't see for the tears.
Lucy xx
"Lately it occurs to me..
what a long strange trip its been."
Heartbreaking
Sad and powerful. Not much else to say.