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Insert new chapter?
After looking at my downloaded copy, I see that this chapter 4 is supposed to be inserted between chapter 3 and the old chapter 4.
I also see that the episodes have all gotten renumbered from "of 9" to "of 10"
We gotta stay on our toes with Ricky, I guess!
(I'll look in more depth when I have some more free time.)
I goofed!
In correcting some typos I found that I had not posted this chapter, so here it is. I renumbered the rest so it all goes in the proper order.
My hero
Ricky is my hero <3<3
Adapting fast
Lauren is really getting into it. Useful to have parents who are not just cool with it, but happy to help. In any event, s/he seems refreshingly free of hang-ups and insecurities. This just keeps getting funnerer. :)
— Emma
Who Could Resist?
Ricky can maintain a romp for a long time, thank heavens. Lauren's parents are as whacky as she is, and we can only judge what Aida's are like from her descriptions, until mother bends down with her jeweler's loupe to authenticate the provenance of the girls' engagement rings.
More please, Ricky!
The posting date seemed anomalous
So I loaded it, to find tha the sidebar had a complete list from part1 to 10
I have been known to comment on how much I enjoy yout writing, especially the reported converstions which are, in spite of their first appearance, much more than just badinage. Therefore thinking I had missed something, I started at with the header entry and then from part 1 till I finished a short while ago. All except this part (4) reported my prior kudos click, which proved its genuine nature by refusing to increase the count when I reclicked (proving that it was a "again"). What was so apalling was that I had none of the feeling of deja vu which I usually get on reading again something I have already read in the past two years.
So it was as if I was reading it as a new story, which I may add had the marvellous ability of keeping me page (and chapter/part) turning.
I was held in its grips by the style of writing, and the story itself, and am amazed that it had not caused me to comment the first time through.
Mea culpa, now, I hope righted!
Best wishes
Dave