Plot Twist In Paradise - Chapter 0 - Acknowledgements & Authors Note

Plot Twist In Paradise

by IAmHerEmma

 

Plot Twist In Paradise cover

 


 

Acknowledgements

 

Before we get to the story, I want to take a moment to properly acknowledge the people who, in one form or another, have helped keep this story going. It's not entirely finished yet — I'm working hard to get there — but it wouldn't have made it this far without them.

Emma Anne Tate. You are one of the kindest people I have ever met in my life. And I say that knowing that all I know you through is a tiny profile picture on BCTS and our numerous conversations via DM or via email, which somehow makes it more remarkable, not less. When I posted my first story on the site, you were the first person to leave a comment. Not just once — you kept going, every part, every chapter. Then the second story — which, for the record, I'm not entirely proud of right now — was something you responded to just as positively, and that meant more than I knew how to say at the time. And now here you are, beta reading for me, giving me feedback that is so generous and so encouraging that I keep asking myself whether I actually deserve all of this. I don't know how to thank you enough. I'm not sure enough exists. But I need you to know that your presence in this journey has been a gift, and I feel genuinely blessed to have met you.

Rachel Moore. You were one of the next people, after Ms. Tate, who made me feel like I actually belonged on BCTS. You and Ms. Tate are very different people, but you are just as warm, just as fun, and someone I could connect with on a personal level almost immediately. And you were the one who kept saying you'd happily beta read anything I sent your way. Not once — you kept offering, unprompted, until I finally took you up on it. I am so glad I did, because I need to be honest about something: I don't think this story survives without you. Not the way it is now. Your feedback, your energy, your willingness to show up and help when I wasn't sure the story was worth it — that is what kept me going when I was ready to quit. So thank you, so so much, chica.

Natasha Black. You've been through so much with me. We talk about stories constantly and it never stops being fun — the back and forth, the theory-crafting, the wild ideas for different kinds of stories I wanted to try and for your own series on FictionMania. You've been a sounding board, a co-conspirator, and a friend through all of it. I truly could not have asked for a better one.

Blake Ashford. You are forever my mentor and my dear friend. You have always been patient. You have always listened — whether it was about writing, about stories, or about the personal stuff that had nothing to do with either. You guided me and calmed me down when I really needed it, and you were the one who told me to push my first story, TGIU, out into the world after a six-year gap — the worst case of writer's block I wouldn't wish on anybody. That push changed everything. I wouldn't be writing this acknowledgement if you hadn't given me that one.

Thank you to all of you for being who you are, and for helping me through this journey of telling stories for someone — or, well, everyone — out there to enjoy.

 


 

Author's Note

 

This story almost didn't happen. Which, if you know anything about how my brain works, is probably not surprising.

I was working on something else — a slow-burn erotica piece that I'd even announced publicly. I was going to release it. It was going to be great. And then, the way these things sometimes go, it just… wasn't. The inspiration didn't fade gradually or give me a polite two-weeks' notice. It just packed its bags one morning and left without a forwarding address. I sat with it for a while, tried to resuscitate it, and eventually had to admit that the story wasn't broken — it was done. Not finished. Just done with me. So I shelved it and tried not to think about what that meant.

Then one day, uninvited and at the worst possible time, a new idea showed up.

Two characters. Complete opposites. The kind of dynamic that was dangerously close to romantic comedy territory, which was a problem because I had never written a romantic comedy in my life. Erotica was what I knew. Erotica was what I was comfortable with.

But the idea wouldn't leave. It started at a wedding — two people who couldn't stand each other, stuck in each other's orbit. The conflict was there, the chemistry was there, but the main character was just… someone with an ordinary job, and I couldn't figure out what made her tick. I had a meet-cute that kept replaying in my head — this one specific moment that I knew had to be in the story — but it wasn't clicking with the setting. The pieces were all on the table and none of them fit together.

Then — and I genuinely cannot tell you how this happened — my brain, which has a well-documented history of going completely off the rails, asked: What if she's an erotica author?

The wedding setting didn't survive the revelation. My brain, having already committed to chaos, went further: What if it's a vacation? An island resort? What if she doesn't even want to go?

And that was it. That was the story.

Except — and I cannot stress this enough — knowing what the story was did not mean I was confident I could actually go through with it. I wanted it to be funny. Not just warm or charming, but genuinely funny. And that terrified me.

I'm going to be honest with you: I gave up on this story more than once. I hit walls. I got sick in the middle of drafting. It wasn't anything serious, just enough to knock the momentum out from under me, and once you stop moving it's dangerously easy to start wondering whether the whole thing was a mistake.

But somehow, chapter by chapter, it kept going. And when I had enough of it written to feel like it might actually be something, I did the scariest thing a writer can do — I gave it to other people to read.

Ms. Emma Anne Tate and Ms. Rachel Moore, my beta readers, are the reason this story made it as far as it has. Though it's still not finished. Their feedback gave me the confidence to believe the story was worth improving. I owe them more than I can put into words.

So here it is. Plot Twist in Paradise. A story I almost didn't write, in a genre I'd never tried, about a character who can't write — which, in hindsight, feels like exactly the kind of irony my brain would find hilarious.

I hope you give it a chance. I hope it makes you laugh. I hope it makes you feel something. And I would love to hear what you think. Stories don't really exist until someone reads them, and I'm grateful you're all here.

Thank you for everything.

P.S. Chapter 1 drops tomorrow. Saturday. And I'm nervous as f—

*play funny instrumental theme song*



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