RE: Unfinished Projects:

Several years back, I started writing a story about a beautiful young transgirl who moves in with her wealthy "uncle" while attending art school. At first they get along fine, but then he begins demanding unusual "favors" in return for food and board:

I wasn't happy with the opening chapter, so I set simply it aside and moved on to another project. Six years later, I'm thinking of rewriting the novella from the ground up, starting with the main character. In the revised version, 'Denise' agrees to perform housekeeping chores in return for a little pocket money - on the condition that she wears a French Maid outfit during "working hours." From there, things grow progressively worse as 'Uncle Jim' subjects her to a treadmill of humiliation, forcing her to act out his domination fantasies (which include strippings, canings and bare-bottom spankings) on a daily basis.

Anyway, now that I've (hopefully) whet your appetite for a little TBDSM, a couple of questions:

1. Would the story work better as a first or third person narrative?
2. Should Denise be a reluctant protagonist, a willing participant, or perhaps both at different points of the story?

Regards, Tracy.