Rock Star Makeover, Part 12

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What a wonderful tale you have crafted. You have pulled tears from my eyes and evoked joy from my heart. Brava.

Joani

Dance, Love, and cook with joy and great abandon

thank you, Joani

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thank you for reading, and for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Dorothycolleen

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Rock Star Makeover, Part 12

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OK Dorothy. Sweet way to end the story. But I for one want to see more of the kids as they grow up.

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

Thank you

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I really enjoyed this story.


He entered the hall to get warm. She left it two hundred years later.
Faeriemage


He entered the hall to get warm. She left it two hundred years later.
Faeriemage

than you, Faeriemage

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I'm glad you liked it, and especially glad you've taken the time to comment.

Dorothycolleen

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Thank you,Dorothy,

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ALISON

'I shall miss your lovely story.It has been a delight.

ALISON

thank you, Alison

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Thanks for the support. You never know, Gabbi, Noah and company may be back someday ....

Dorothycolleen

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Dorothy, Thanks for the

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Dorothy,

Thanks for the sweet story. A very nice read.

Hugs,
Kelly

thank you, Kelly

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It was fun to write. I'm glad it was fun to read, too.

Dorothycolleen

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Very very good

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This is the kind of story I love. Low on major tensions, with the heroes being the heroes and everything working out right in the end. A great, relaxing and sweet read, thank you!

Melanie E.

thanks, Melanie

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I am really glad you liked it. A "relaxing, sweet read" is exactly what I was shooting for here.

Dorothycolleen

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Great Series!

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Thanks for the great read luv, peace

thank you, newcnote

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thank you for the comment. Glad you liked it.

Dorothycolleen

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A story that left me smiling

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You're awesome Dorothy! :)

Faraway

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Faraway

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Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!

thank you, Faraway

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I'm glad you think I'm awesome. Who am I to disagree with such a smart person? LOL!

Dorothycolleen

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great story

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again great story. i enjoyed this very much. keep up the good work.
robert

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Thank you, robert.

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Glad you enjoyed it. thanks for the comment, they keep me writing.

Dorothycolleen

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nice rap up

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thanks, I enjoyed your story.

thank you, LoneWolf

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thank you so much for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Dorothycolleen

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thank you, Cliff

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And your smile makes it all worthwhile!

Dorothycolleen

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Great finish but you have to make a book 2 for Lisa

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Nice finish to this part of the story but Lisa needs a bit of attenchion to hun so please make a book 2 that includes maybe a rockstar makeover for her too.
Love Samantha Renee Heart

Love Samantha Renee Heart

thanks, Renee

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There may yet be a book 2, we will have to see. If there is, you can bet Lisa will be invited to the party....

Dorothycolleen

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Excellent Dorothy!

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Loved it.

Maybe you ccould call the follow on 'Butterfly?'

LoL
Rita

Age is an issue of mind over matter.
If you don't mind, it doesn't matter!
(Mark Twain)

LoL
Rita

thanks Rita

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glad you enjoyed it.

Dorothycolleen

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Great story, I wish it

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Great story, I wish it wasn't over. :(

Here's hoping to a return of Noah, Gabbi, Adam, and Lisa...

thanks, Valentine

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glad you liked it. You never know, there could be more if my muse agrees

Dorothycolleen

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Good One...

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Little if anything to add to the other kudos here. Nice story, winning ending, and a payoff involving our POV character in more ways than one. Nicely done.

Eric

thanks, Eric

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thanks for the comment. Glad you liked it.

Dorothycolleen

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great story

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I certainly do wish the whole world could be more understanding such as the wonderful world I just read of... great story please never stop writing

thank you

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I'll write as long as I have a muse.

Thanks for commenting

Dorothycolleen

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