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"Ignition!" shouted Billy. Blue flames, the visible side-effect of his time-bending forcefield, burst out from his shoulder armor where Tess had concentrated her friction power and Penny had provided a laser spark. Tess switched her waning powers to simply thickening the air around them.
Their fall slowed. Billy had practiced falling from heights many times and with turbulent rapid scissor kicks managed to guide them toward the now-only-toasty warm outstretched palms of the giant robot.
"Got you," said Penny in the bass growl of the Nuclear Knight.
Tess's eight-year-old body, reserves all used-up, collapsed into unconsciousness at the announcement of their safety.
The hulk of the cyborg jetcopter crashed into the vineyard below them, wings tearing off, boom-like tail section breaking in half. The armor glass of the unused cockpit shattered and the heavy plastic fuel bladders in the tanks burst flooding the crash site with jet fuel that quickly caught fire from hot pieces of engine debris.
A column of greasy black smoke rose and was quickly blown into a ring by the first of several vapor explosions. For a moment it looked as if a nuclear explosion had occurred after all.
Penny opened the passenger shelf on the front of the Knight's body, letting Billy slip inside the narrow compartment, still holding Tess, who in turn still clasped her ever-more-raggedy dolly. The big robot then bent its path toward the airport where Lady Karma and other first aid could surely be found.
Smoke and flames rose behind them: Spartako's funeral pyre.
* * *
Seeing that the kids would be safe, Lady Karma reached out for the spirit of death and dying she sensed, a hungry spirit of longing and weariness. "You may go home," she told it. "Ride the wheel again or find your own peace. Goodbye, goodbye, I tell you three times, goodbye to this entangling life, you wounded souls."
Her eyes popped open. Souls?
"Man," said Leo beside her watching the burning wreckage, "What a candle!"
* * *
At the far edge of the airport, past some warehouses and untidy commercial buildings, near an empty SUV with both doors open, Candace Munson knelt on the ground holding her husband's head in her lap. "She's safe, Todd, she's safe! Wake up, honey!" She'd pulled off both their masks when she'd seen him collapse after watching Tess's rescue.
Todd's eyes fluttered, half-open. "They're gone," he whispered.
"No, no," said Candace. "The big mecha saved them! They're okay, Tess and the boy, they're okay."
He tried to sit up and she helped him. "I saw that," he said. "Then I reached for the mind still in the wreckage and something sucked all the others out of me." He looked at her, a small if worried smile playing with his expression. "They're gone, all the ghosts that haunted me are gone."
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Yay!!
I was sure Penny would save the day, but ya caught me by surprise with the last bit. Nicely played out.
Scott
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Bree
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Hmmm, I Wonder If...
...any of the souls left their powers behind when they went on?
Something is bothering me a bit. Why did Billy's flame suddenly go out? Was he caught in a slight backwash of Tessie's power when she used it on the cyborg? It seems strange both Tessie and Billy would become powerless at the same moment. Especially as Billy had been doing great up to that point.
This has been a great story! Thanks! :)
I'll really be looking forward to your continuing Tessie's story later.
Billy's flames and Todd's ghosts
While Erin could doubtless spin the bologna that Billy had been using his power pretty fierce and doing things with his forcefield that he'd never done before.... I can tell you why his flame went out. Dramatic necessity. ::grin::
Nice twist on the ghosts being released, Erin, but where have they gone? Looking for other little girls in trouble? Hmm? Maybe a vanful of Bluebirds going over a cliff or something? Squeals and sequels, perhaps? ::lol::
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Spin the bologna?
Is that a game they play in the eighth grade? Or a Chinese-Italian acrobat troupe? Or perhaps if you can't spin the bologna, a little man named Rumpledsausageskin comes in and offers to do it for you? ;D
And of course, you're right about Billy's flames. :)
As to the ghosts, I ain't saying.
- Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
spin the bologna
ba·lo·ney [bə lṓnee]
(plural ba·lo·neys)
n (informal)
1. food Same as bologna (sense 1)
2. nonsense: nonsense or lies
That's nonsense. It's baloney.
Encarta ® World English Dictionary © & (P) 1998-2005 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved.
I think the meaning was 'tell a non-sensical tale' ? See the second definition.
Holly
One of the most difficult things to give away is kindness.
It usually comes back to you.
Holly
Sense and Nonsense
I usually leave spinning the bologna to people who get paid to do it, like politicians. :)
I'm just trying to visualize whether you do it with a slice or a stick. :)
- Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Boogie Prometheans?
< sings >We had a pig roast, spit the earth- and it spun on its axis, like a pig on a stick, everybody picking on it!< /sings >
In other news, I'm really liking this series.
The story has mostly ended its
Tense action moments. Now for the aftermath.
Faraway
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Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!