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The scene at the airport bustled with Centurion's duplicates, Blue Star Troops in armor, and various local, state and national authorities. Sky Bolt wanted to take LeJeune in as material witness in an overcrime case while the FBI and DEA held that they had prior jurisdiction in the venue of corruption, money laundering, kidnapping and drug smuggling.
"What drug?" said Sky Bolt. The fin on his tall blue helmet had seldom looked more shark-like as he grinned toothily down at the other federal agents.
"We haven't made that determination yet," said the DEA man.
"Oh bullshit, you know it was jooce, which makes it overcrime since metahuman blood is the only known source for hypradine."
* * *
The argument continued while The Last Centurion called a meeting of his partners. Nate as Skytower, coordinated the telepresence of absent members while Len made a few proposals.
"You know I've never liked having the group named after me, I'm proposing that we change our official designation to The Urban Commandos or maybe just The Commandos, in honor of Hank," he said.
Daedalos pointed out that "commando" is a collective noun, like battalion, and doesn't really need to be plural but the resolution passed unanimously anyway.
"Next item," said Len, "new members. Kendra has nominated Todd Munson for probationary status and Leonard Paine as associate member. Also, Tess Munson is to be re-enlisted as a reserve member. Any discussion?"
"Codenames?" asked Daedalos, who liked to keep all the records straight.
"Paine is using Catclaw, Munson probably won't want to use Death Masque if the feds let him switch sides and I'm not sure about Tessie," Len admitted.
"I've got an idea for Tessie," said Billy.
* * *
Don Turpen, Senior Star Trooper present, opened his faceplate to get a better look at the information panel the FBI forensic technician held up. "So Spartako isn't dead?" They both glanced at the still steaming hulk of the shattered jetcopter buried in the vineyard.
"Well he's not exactly alive either," Agent June McAtkins said. A lot of FBI agents hated the official federal superteam members but McAtkins thought Turpen more than a little cute -- and she'd seen him out of armor plenty of times.
Don waggled his Groucho-like moustache at her. "An undead cyborg monster assassin? Comets and catfish, but I hate it when one of those shows up."
FBI agents seldom giggle, McAtkins reminded herself.
* * *
Billy's residual blazing forcefield on the top of his head lit the darkened room with an eerie blue glow. Keeping a bit of his flame going made it easier to expand it during an emergency and looking like his hair was on fire had a certain coolness he liked. It beat carrying a Bic lighter in his pocket.
He sat on the edge of the kid-sized deskchair and looked at the sleeping little girl. Exhausted by her adventures, Tessie slept deeply, cuddling her ragged-and-stained dolly in her arms, two fingers of her right hand resting on her lower lip.
He sat quietly for some time just watching her; unusual behavior for the Man in Motion.
He thought about Hank Herbert, whom he'd known for years and whose spirit now inhabited the tiny sleeping warrior in front of him. He thought about Johnny Bellows, the brother he hadn't seen in six years who would now be ten years old -- and still a captive of Dr. Meridien. For Johnny's sake, he hadn't told anyone of the Man Who Would Not See the Sun Again and his strange penchant for kidnapping the children of metahumans--but that would change now.
Besides warning of Spartako's assasination and kidnap attempt, Johnny's brief call from the Dubai airport had included the news that he'd worked out his own escape plan. Win or lose, the boy would soon be free of Dr. Meridien leaving big brother Gilbert, alias Billy Blueblazes, free to pursue the man who would not see the sun.
"Maybe you can meet my brother someday, punkin," Billy whispered. "Good night, Jinx." He kissed a fingertip and placed it gently on the sleeping girl's forehead before leaving the room.
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Well alright
For now. There are still a lot of questions remaining but the most pressing ones has been if not answered, settled for the present. However, YOU know we want to know rather or not Ted got to keep the powers of his now departed hitch hitchers. Will Johnny escape the man who lives in darkness? Will Jinx need a new dollie? :)
Great story Erin but we want more... *makes big puppy dog eyes*...
Hugs!
grover
Details
I'm still catching up with putting all the new stuff I invented into my Promethean Diaries; does anyone remember if Jinx's dolly had a name? :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
The other question is...
...what powers does Annie have? :)
A great wrap up to a great series. Like everyone else, I look forward to more.
Scott
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Bree
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Inert lumpness
It's a bit much to expect more from a cloth bag full of rags. :)
Glad you liked it.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
I dunno...
One of the scariest anti-heroes in the entirety of the DC Comics universe is "The Ragman" ... who happens to be a cloth bag full of rags
I do! I do!!
It's Annie!!
You're right!
I checked! :)
- Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Heyla, Erin: Thank you so
Heyla, Erin:
Thank you so much for this series. It brought some fond recollections of the Drabbles, I think they were, but in a nice, serialized continuous fashion. Pllus, the characters, especially Tess, were just fun. It was wonderful to read.
-r
-a
Drabbles
Kind of the idea. :) Short and full of stuff happening.
Thank you, and you're welcome.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
::happy sigh::
This has truly been an amazing series. It feels sad coming to the end, but very nice the way you brought it to a close. Even with all their amazing powers, everyone felt very human and believable. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story.
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Heather Rose Brown
Author of Bobby's Rainy Day Adventure
Sad for me too
For the last six weeks, I always had something to think about in quiet times. :)
Thank you and you're welcome.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Urban renewal
Great series Erin.
You sure it is finished? How did Johnny escape? Does Billy get the evil Dr Meridian?
You have lots of material that is left hanging, plus all the souls that were scattered about?
You left more questions than answers. Plenty of stuff for a sequel.
Good job on your series, I really enjoyed it. It was quite fast too. Just goes to show you don't need a lot of words to put together a good story.
Hugs
Joni W
About 16,000 words
In forty days. :)
And yes, there will be a sequel. :) Eventually.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
So when's Volume 2 coming out?
This totally feels like an arc. You gotta write more! In some ways I feel like reading this is like reading comic books- they're like candy. They come all to rarely, you know you shouldn't have them, they're very sweet and gone far too quickly.
Especially since 29 eps is one long season.
Apparently Tessie has a code|nickname now? What are you going to do with all of the other people who you've brought up and half-introduced?
Rainbows
I did build it like an arc in a comic book series, on purpose. :) And like comic book arcs, some loose ends are always left over for later stories.
Tessie is now on the rolls of the New Urban Commandos as Jinx. And I'm going to let a lot of the other people I introduced just go on with their lives without interference from me.:)
One of the oddities of doing this at BC is almost every story will need a TG element and for some stories I might tell, that wouldn't necessarily work. The "Death of Tiger-Man" and "Blood of Monsters" stories wouldn't really have any TG in them so they will probably remain as just references. Most of the Nuclear Knight's story has no TG, and is TG now only if one considers the fact that few people know that Penny, a female, is in control of the giant robot. :)
There's plent of TG in the Stoney Bottom story line though, and I intend to get back to that soon.
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
That's the kinda problem I have :)
Most of the stuff I write, adding a TG element would overcomplicate things
Face it, if you're gonna add a TG bit to a story, it pretty much has to be a main or a first derivative character. I tend to make my characters have so much going on, who has time to worry about whether they're wearing a dress or a tux to the Prom?
Someday Erin
A comment on one of my stories reminded me of this most excellent superhero tale. I simply had to go back and reread the whole glorious thing! I almost feel like carefully putting each issue carefully back into their protective sleeves, but of course I can't because they're not really comic books. They should be!
Erin I just wanted you to know that someday I would really like to see more of Billy, Tess, Annie and all the rest!
Hugs!
Grover
Thanks, Grover
I'm actually working on a new comic book story, with an artist. It will perhaps be appearing online sometime this summer. It doesn't feature any characters I've created before but does have some TG in it.
Now I've got to go catch up on Once a Hero as I am several issues behind. Time to dig the longbox out from under the bed. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Urban Renewal
I'm looking forward to it! Although we only had one image to go with Urban Renewal, Heather Rose's Tessie was perfect! That's not to say we're not looking forward to seeing more of a certain red head and blond in room Number 5! :)
Hugs!
Grover