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Lolo still has a lot of
Lolo still has a lot of issues to work out, but she's definatly handling it (?). I kept waiting for Jean to walk on on Lolo and Scott... Or for Kitty to see how Lolo looks at Scott and call her out on it... Or for Jean to "accidentally" establish a mental link with one of them while they are up to no good. One thing for sure I'm looking forward to seeing it all blow up or for the three of them to live happily ever after as a thruple.
Anyways I very much enjoyed the chapter and am looking forward to it all playing out.
I don't know...
She seems mostly to be "handling" handfuls of the sheets. I actually tried to keep Kitty from seeing Lolo and Scott interact and this Jean Grey is respectful of her friend's privacy, so while they're definitely ing with fire, only Bobby has witnessed anything and he has no clue.
I've always been fascinated by people who claim to just fall into an affair, never really could see it. But this was my attempt at creating some dialog that sorta made it seem like a possibility (of course it took a magic drug, a mind transfer, a couple full body remakes, and powerful pheromones but it was the best I could do).
I won't give away the ending, which is getting close, but I hope you'll find it deals with everyone appropriately.
Thanks for the comment Mudge, it's always great to hear any feedback, but knowing you like the chapter means a lot, it really keeps me going.
Lots of bed-work in this chapter
A few interesting threads woven into the relationship dramas!
I'm enjoying how the story is deepening and changing as it moves through the dalliances.
- iolanthe
Threads, yes there are threads
I mean, oh yeah, there's a scary group of mutants bent on world domination. But first Lolo needs emotional reinforcement via sex. Totally healthy. And now that she's been interrupted, I'm sure she will be able to regain her focus and equilibrium. Hahahahaha!