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Once again she has done it
Once again Snowfall has done it again. she has given us a wonderful start to a new and wonderful world of possiblities.
May the peace and happiness of the Goddess keep and protect you
as always your humble outlaw
Jessie Wolf
Another excellent storyline.
Another excellent storyline. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Wonderful Start!
I'm looking forward to reading more of this story ! It looks like Tessa will make her own dreams come true in two ways . Finally being her true self and bringing back a treasured childhood memory for herself and so many others in the town! The deputy's promise reminds me of what Lt. Dan said to Forrest Gump when he told him he was going to be a shrimp boat captain!
Oh, wow! I like this story.
Oh, wow! I like this story. I look forward to reading the next installment.
Mind you, all of your books are on my go-to-list when I am in the mood to re-read something. I think I have read Frills and The Pom Pom Fortress at least 6 or 7 times each. And I read The Station's Late Nite Princess twice in the first few weeks after it came out. Off hand, I don't remember ever having read a novel length story twice in one month before. I am really looking forward to reading the rest of you stories here. I really like your work. Thank you.
She's back.
Snowfall has got a new one. YAY! Now I have something good to look forward to on friday's again.
Goody Goody Goody Goody Goody Goody Goody
Jessica Marie
making Fridays Fun
Great start to a new Weekly reader
Goddess Bless you
Love Desiree
another good one
Well, once again you have another great start that is going to lead to another darn good story..*you go girl*
Seat Belts...
"Ok Mister Stewart. Put a seat belt on your office chair, you're going to need it."
Pretty sure I had that thought somewhere in the middle of PomPom, certainly had it not far into the LyssaK Missions!
(and everything else Snowfall writes for us, which should go without saying)
"He now owned 240 acres of dream."
very nice!
Well done Alicia,
' you have done it again ,great story and obviously so well thought out ,we are all set for another wild ride !! Thank you.
Yayyy
another story has started to worm it's way into my heart, love the start of what I am sure is going to be another fantastic offering from the lovely Sweet Snowfall.
Although I am sure there's going to be a few cliff's waiting for us to gasp and wait to see whats going to happen.
Cannot wait to see what our lovely Authoress has in store for us with this offering.
Matt
<blocks off every Friday evening for the forseeable future>
This ought to be quite interesting - I am excited to see how it goes. Terry has the money to make this happen. But there is more than just money to consider.
Kudos to the bank president for having no issue with the transition, though the bank could probably stay open on Terry's money alone.
the great universal lube.
that is the funny thing about most banks. the more money you put in one the more they want to have sex with you or is it your money. *scratches head in confusion.* then again money does have a habit of greasing a great many wheels in types of business.
May the peace and happiness of the Goddess keep and protect you
as always your humble outlaw
Jessie Wolf
Ain't that the truth.
When My grandmother left my mother Half her CD's not the musical kind in here will all of a sudden the bank gave her, a better interest rate on all her accounts both checking and savings along with a lower rate on her credit cards with them.
If you do not have more than $10K USD in your checking account or savings accounts they usually do not even really care about you.
now her Debit card is a special kind with the bank that will get her instant help from a human being or a sit down with the branch manager on duty if she needs to discuss loans or other investments.
So you can walk in and there be a line of normal account people and all she has to do is raise her debit card and instant service to the head of the line.
"Cortana is watching you!"
Banks
That is why I use a credit union for my banking. Instead of charging me monthly fees they pay me an annual dividend of several hundred.
Great start Snow. I almost missed it last night.
Dawn
Ditto.
With the nightmare stories I've heard about banks charging interest for just HAVING your money in there, glitched online compared to my credit union...well, WHEN I move I will make sure to put my money in a Credit Union.
Speaking of...are there many Credit Unions in Japan and South Korea?
Oooohhhh ... you're giving me goosebumps!
Having a little extra inside information about this story, I can't wait to see it develop! This promises to be another great one, Hon - and I am truly looking forward to it.
D
D. Eden
“Hier stehe ich; ich kann nicht anders. Gott helfe mir.”
Dum Vivimus, Vivamus
Captivating.... yet fairly Vague.
Such a vague start on a story. Thus far, very little background, and a glimpse at the future, yet it's captivating. Definitely going to be looking forward to updates. Not sure how you manage to bring us in so quickly that were already anticipating a second chapter, but not going to put too much thought into that, as ignorance is bliss. Just gonna be happy to have something to look forward to.
Another Snowfall Saga begins!
Hooray! So happy to see a new tale from you. And an exciting change of pace with an adult rather than teen protagonist. Looking forward to the second chapter!
Yay!
Glad to see you finally posted this! Looking forward to seeing the coming chapters, great concept here!
Here we go again
Looking forward to seeing more of Tessa!
>>> Kay
Off to a good start.
I always look forward to a new tale from you.
***
And you almost never disappoint.
(Sorry for the 'almost', but as you know no one is perfect. Besides, the problem could be mine. You just think you're strange ...)
Thanks,
T
Dreams are what keepus alive
Even with my current disability I am living mine.
240 Acres of dream
Wonderful!
Edit:
1/2 mile by 3/4 mile is one configuration that will yield 240 acres. Nice chunk of land.
Another great start!
As the heading says, you are off to a great start and have given us readers something to look forward to on Fridays. It will be interesting to see how things develop in the future for this intrepid soul! Kudos!
Oooooh, I can see from the
Oooooh, I can see from the author's name we are in for a real treat and a great ride. Am already intrigued by the first chapter. Let the fun and games begin in the new "old" amusement park.
Welcome back!
I was hoping that you would have something the works, and here it is! I can only echo the praises above.
Waiting to see the next segment.
Love your work.
Looking forward to more amusement!
I've fantasized a couple times about winning the lottery, but this sounds like much more fun!!
Gillian Cairns
GREAT
Loved the story and waiting for more.
VentureRealm
This looks like fun
The beginnings of another excellent yarn!
I'd like to go to Vegas with
I'd like to go to Vegas with her,and have her place the bets!
Very intriguing start . Now to catch up to date.
Karen
Parents really missed out
Terry's parents really missed out on a generous and caring person that was their son. Their real problem was that they never learned what the Bible was trying to teach. They got caught up with tradition and lost their son in the process.
Terry held onto a dream he had as a child, and fate stepped to help him fulfill that dream. And along the way, others benefited from his dream.
Wonder if that officer is ready to retire and start his new job?
Others have feelings too.
Different start...
Having read the three Kindle books, and now having evenings free again, it's time to return to BCTS - and where better to start than Alecia Snowfall's latest free release? :)
So, a considerably different start to the Kindle releases, and it'll be interesting to see how things develop as both Tess emerges and the theme park re-emerges. One thing's almost certain: all children will be able to dress up as both masuline and feminine characters, regardless of whether they present as masculine or feminine on entry... :)
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
Re-reading this tale...
I started reading this when it was posted 'live', but moved house in December 2017, causing a three year exodus from here. Now I'm back, can't remember where I got up to, and since I've probably forgotten many details, time to restart.
So far, we've got the money and the vision - so presumably next will be working to design the reincarnated Park (probably including features to help it weather storms better!), obtaining planning permission and starting construction. Oh, and of course starting to establish Tessa's identity.
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!