Yes I'm asking for more comments. I went though the entire story line per line of Allens Discovery chapter 2 and did alot of changes, edits and corrections to make it easier to read. There were alot of errors and sentences that just didn't make since when I went over it again.

I am wondering if it is better now.

Hi everyone! Part 5 of Once the Hero is up at StarDust. As you know I put up Part 4 here at BCTS yesterday because of time constraints today. I may have to do that again due to my schedule meaning one or both updates may be on Saturday instead of Sunday. I honestly don't see how Ang and the other serial posters manage it! :)

Stay tuned to this Rocket Channel for more exciting information!

Hugs!

Grover

For all that have been waiting patiently, for the editing etc, unfortunitewly i had/am having computer issues so instead of pure reposting i'll be editing them by the instalements already here at BC-topshelf. The next instalments may be posted before I edit the rest. I had seceral more instalments, well about 2 or 3 idf i remember correctly, but a virus or something in my computer has totally swiped my writings all of them. So once again, the lepricauns arent all that in my favour lol.

I am not a Doctor.

The latest research suggests it may all be a myth, or even Skene's gland aka the female prostate - which in itself isn't always recognised or even found in all women apparently.

For those who wish to read more: http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/magazine/8443465.stm

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Skene%27s_gland

Angharad

I wondering about the mechanics of wearing a long ankle length skirt during the winter? Besides thinking I'm just crazy as its 16 out today with a wind chill of-5. Any ideas or........

I have a story published on Stardust called The Chosen.

When I wrote it, I envisioned a time in the not too far distant future, when the world was facing a crisis.

The story is about a world where girls are no longer being born. The consequence of this was, eventually we as a species would die out.

Erin shut off the comments on Samantha Jay's blog and I don't want to discuss Forced Fem -- so I'll take the discussion on a different path.

When a person decides to write and post a story they create an implied contract with the reader. That much I think we can agree upon. It is at that point that we, the authors of BC, hold vastly different opinions.

First off, I am not critising authors or trying to upset them. It's just a question to see if I am the strange one or not.

Just to let you know that I have posted a new story called The Chosen on Stardust. I will be posting it here, if I get a positive response about a week later.

Any new chapters will be published the same way.

So if you have few minutes to spare, pop across and have a look!

Hugs
Sue

If anyone knows how to make the story look nicer, especially on the Stardust front page, I would be grateful for any help. It's not as easy as BCTS!

I got a question for all you at big closet who have been keeping up with my story. Is it going in a good direction? This is the first time I've shared a story with anyone. So I want to know where I could improve, and what's capturing your attention. I really want my story to grow. and as selfish as it may seem, I want it to be popular. I want my writing to grow into it's own world.

Kitten ^^

I was reading a news article online, and thought there was a story idea in there

http://www.nzherald.co.nz/travel/news/article.cfm?c_id=7&obj...

My thoughts are about a hotel security manager watching patrons attending a conference, where one 'lady' attracts his interest. Not sure where it goes from there, but its a start...

I really laughed at the last paragraph or so, with the sex toys and a nuns habit...

Yesterday I was reading a story from the Random 5olos list and had to leave before I was finished. My brain has vapor locked and I cannot remember the story title nor the author. It was about a 13 year old withdrawn boy who goes to stay with his aunt in California and reveals to her that he is a girl inside. If anyone can help I would be thankful.