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I rewrote the kiss by the boathouse scene. You can re-read it in context by going to the last chapter, or just read this excerpt:
They did exchange one more kiss — down by the boathouse, away from prying eyes and unwanted interruptions.
"That was nice," Anneka said as they parted.
"Yeah, I suppose," Lori agreed.
“Didn’t you like it?” Anneka’s brow creased with concern.
“It’s not that. I don’t know, I suppose I expected something more.”
“Maybe I didn’t do it right.”
“No, I’m pretty sure you did. I guess, maybe… I don’t know. Maybe I’m not ready for this… Yet.”
Anneka dropped her gaze. Lori reached out for her friend’s hand and gave it a squeeze.
“Maybe I’m just too caught up in what I’m going through right now. I mean I like you — you know, like really like you. It’s just…”
Anneka lifted her head and offered a fragile smile. “It’s okay, I mean we have loads of time, don’t we? This doesn’t have to be a now thing. It doesn’t change things between us, does it?”
Loris squeezed again. “Of course not. I mean friends first and forever, right?"
Anneka forced her smile a little wider. "Friends first and forever."
High up in the castle, Minerva's office gave her a clear view. She didn't like spying on pupils, but she’d been concerned. She let out a relieved sigh.
"Well," she murmured to herself, "there’s at least one problem can be put off for another day.”
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