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(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 61


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 61
Fireworks

Everyone at the table was talking, while carefully leaving me out of it. I was happy about that and grateful. I'd already embarrassed myself enough by not knowing what to say, saying the wrong thing, having my RTS kick in making me look bustier and curvier, and knowing that the Stirling's knew what had happened earlier in the day. I didn't want to make it worse.



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This story is 72 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 60


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 60
Up To Fate

The table was covered in finger foods. Pointing at one that looked like it was peaches in a steaming purple sauce, the dish floated up and came over to me, putting a single piece of fruit on my plate. Using my fork I cut off a small piece, and gave it a taste. As it melted in my mouth, it had an odd flavour of a sweet peach, and a slightly sour taste that worked really well together, keeping both flavours from being too strong.



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This story is 93 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 59

** Sorry about the absence. I was renovating, got injured and couldn't take the time to rest and recover. Writing was difficult.
Everything should be back on schedule now.


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 59
Conspiracy!

“I look like an idiot,” I said to my reflection and the empty room.



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This story is 48 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 58


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 58
Hormones and Magic

“What's wrong with Petra?” Ella asked, as her group arrived back at the beach house.



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This story is 23 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 57


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 57
New And Unwanted Feelings

It was one of my worst nightmares.

I was naked in the middle of a crowded city street and everyone was looking at me. My nemesis, who had threatened to kill me twice, and was just as naked as I was, was holding me tightly against his chest. Our clothes had completely vanished, sucked up by a street cleaning machine, which was going on it's merry way completely ignoring us. And I couldn't breathe.



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This story is 83 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 56


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 56
It Could Be Worse



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This story is 9 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 52


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 52
A Dinner Invitation

Lying on a fluffy towel, surrounded by soft green sand, with the sound of waves just a few feet away, I had to admit life wasn't so bad.



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This story is 36 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 48


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 48
Better Pack A Bathing Suit

Sitting in the subterfuge office after classes had ended for the day, I gave Bob my best smile. “Hi, I'm hoping you could help me out with something.”

Leaning forward in to put his elbows on the desk, the pudgy faced, beardless dwarf smiled back at me. “Of course, of course. What do you need?”



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This story is 65 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 47


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 47
Planning A Heist
(Time Skip)

Ella stood at the head of our usual table and raised her glass of juice. “Everyone, I know that some of you may have thought this day would never come. But by sticking and working together, we have finished our first month at Doom Valley.”



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This story is 55 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 46


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 46
Nothing Comes For Free

Now that I knew what was going on with me, it seemed as if I was changing even more quickly. Walking with Ella to the nurse's office, I stumbled and almost fell down a flight of stairs as my left leg became a little shorter and my right toes got cat claws. Fangs popped out of my mouth and my breasts shrank to the size they were after my first change.

“I'm going to be sick,” I moaned. The Rapid Transformation Syndrome was making my insides roil.



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This story is 96 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 45


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 45
New Problems

“Petra,” Ella called. “Come out from under the bed. What's wrong?”

I was huddled in the corner of the Monster Under The Bed's room, clutching my knees to my still enormous chest. The Monster was patting my head with her trunk, making cooing sounds trying to calm me down. One of her long, multi-jointed arms took a cookie from a plate on her table and held it up to me. I didn't take it. I barely noticed it.



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This story is 85 words long.

A Weekend with the Neighbor's

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A weekend with the neighbor’s
Part 1
by Princess Panty Boy



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This story is 11 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 43


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 43
A Warning

The boys were staring at me again.



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This story is 14 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 41


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 41
From Bad to Worse

Stepping into combat class, I saw that everyone was lined up by the protection medals. Ameth was crouched on the table watching everyone like a hawk. Getting in line behind Naomi, I asked, “What's going on?”

“No idea,” she said. “I just got in line with everyone else.”

We moved quickly and soon enough it was our turn. “Sign your names for a medal,” the cat girl said.



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This story is 77 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 40


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 40
A Relaxing Day

Hi Mom and Dad,

Just thought I should let you know that I'm still alive. Barely.

Doom Valley has been really interesting. I've been killed about twenty times. Don't worry I got better.

And guess what, have a nemesis. Three of them actually. One of them is a paladin who thinks I'm evil incarnate, he almost killed me.
I've also almost been brainwashed three times, those were from my other two nemesis's? Nemeses?



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This story is 81 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 39

Drying off after the hot tub, I leaned over and quietly asked Ella, “What exactly is a manicure and pedicure?”

“You really are a boy,” she whispered, her smile taking any potential sting out of her words. “They're going to clean, massage, and colour our hands, feet, and nails. It feels really nice, just relax and go with it.”



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This story is 59 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 37


Doom Valley Prep School
Chapter 37
Family Ties

“Time to get up, Petra,” Ella said.

Instinctively I mumbled, “I don't wanna die!”

I heard my roommate sigh, then she pulled my soft, warm, safe blanket off of me. “You're not going to die. It's the weekend, time for homework and relaxing.”



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This story is 50 words long.

(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 8


Doom Valley Prep School
Desperate Measures
By
Domoviye



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(Rewritten) Doom Valley Prep School: Chapter 7

Doom Valley Prep School
OOPS
By
Domoviye

A gong woke us up for our first breakfast at Doom Valley Prep School. Today was the day we'd meet the older students, see the school and pick our classes, I was dreading every minute of it. While Ella stepped into her closet and came out wearing the blue school dress, I came out in my padded armour. After seeing how bad the freshmen were, I didn't want to even think what the older students were like and had to be ready for anything.



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This story is 91 words long.

The Job 51

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CHAPTER 51
I won’t belittle the real pain and suffering we were told about, but it became routine after a while. I don’t mean that we got blasé, rather that each case Paul brought us went through what was becoming a very smooth and practised system.

Each one was, in the end, similar, and as the similarities piled up, so did the list of ‘further to’ charges awaiting Dai Pritchard, Bob Evans, one call-centre worker and two civilian employees in Cardiff and Swansea’s control rooms.



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This story is 87 words long.

Being Samantha Masters - Chapter 1: The Pamphlet

Being Samantha Masters

an homage-prequel to Being Christina Chase



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The Summer Ball - Part 2 - You can't hide

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26 months later, September – At a bar in a small coastal town in Northern California.
The place was fairly quiet as it was early on a Monday evening. It would get quite rowdy later as the ‘Dallas Cowboys’ were playing at home that night against the 49’ers and the game would be shown on the big screen. Naturally, this being California, most of the locals supported the 49’ers.

Two people were working behind the bar preparing for the night ahead when the door opened and in walked a tall Blonde woman wearing a white blouse, black tight leather trousers and black ankle boots.

“Hello Sean. I’ll have a G & T please but hold the T.”

The barman looked up from the ‘shot’ glass he was drying and saw Ingrid standing in front of him. His face dropped. To him, she looked the spitting image of Marylin Monroe in the ‘Seven Year Itch’. Another words, totally stunning and totally out of place for the clientele of ‘Big Jake’s Famous Bar & Grill’.



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This story is 173 words long.

Cowgirl Hala

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Cowgirl Hala
By
Gwen Brown

This story is a sequel to "Hala's Snow Day". There are 8 additional chapters planned to this story.



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This story is 22 words long.

One Good Turnip Deserves Another

One Good Turnip Deserves Another
By Camospam
Journal Entry

She did it again!
I hate it when she pulls my face down into her breasts. And what in all the hells does ‘Onee-chan’ mean anyway?



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Pink Panties Part 3

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Pink Pantie’s
Part-3
By Princess Pantyboy

Chris Taylor/Me 10-years-old boy
Cindy Taylor 5-year-old little sister
Pam Taylor 16-year-old big sister
Mom 36-years-old but looks like she is 20
Tammy & Lisa 5-years-old twin sisters from school
Ms. Huntington kindergarten teacher

(Author’s note: I started this chapter with a couple paragraphs from the end of Part 2. I hope and pray you enjoy my little story.
Hugs, Princess Pantyboy)



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This story is 69 words long.

Pink Panties Part 2

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Pink Pantie’s
Part-2
By Princess Pantyboy

Chris/Me 10-years-old boy
Cindy 5-year-old little sister
Pam 16-year-old big sister
Mom 36-years-old but looks like she is 20

(Author’s note: I started this chapter with a couple paragraphs from Part1. I hope and pray you enjoy my little story.
Hugs, Princess Pantyboy)



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This story is 51 words long.

Echoes- Part 7

Echoes Part VII

By Melanie Ezell

New revelations and an unexpected encounter bring Miriam's confusion and anger to a head. Something has to be done... but what?

(Note: This set of chapters has a murder scene. It's not all that intense, but those who are a little squeamish about such things might wanna be careful. From this point on, the maturity rating of the chapters ramps up a bit.)



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This story is 69 words long.

Being Christina Chase | Chapter 38: Valentine's Day

     "You can't be in here. This is girl space."
"I don't recall 'girl space' being outlined in the zoning regulations."
     "This," Christina stated manically as she outlined a square around her body with her hands, "is a girls-only establishment, hence girl space." She drew a square around Richard and said, "That is boy space. Boy space is not allowed in girl space. You have to go outside."

Being Christina Chase

Chapter 38 - Valentine's Day

by Admiral Krunch



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Princess and the Plague: Erika goes to Hollywood 5

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Princess and the Plague
Erika goes to Hollywood
5

by Anistasia Allread
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A Gayle Blows Up Part 40 - The Final

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Part 40

So our year carried on in Delhi. We rehearsed and shot scenes in English and Hindi. Aganee had flown directly here and was now working with all of us to make sure the Hindi version was right for the era as so many new words had crept in.



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The Princess and the Plague : 21

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The Princess and the Plague


By Anistasia Allread
Edited by Edeyn

The whole room slanted even more steeply with the vertigo. He wanted to tilt his head to compensate but knew that it wouldn't really help. Closing his eyes wouldn't do anything but make his parents think that he was ignoring them.

"I - I - you don't know what it's like!" Eric wailed, "I had to do something!"

Tears blurred his vision

     

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Pink Panties

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Pink Panties

By Princess Pantyboy

Chris/Me 10-years-old boy
Cindy 5-year-old little sister
Pam 16-year-old big sister
Mom 36-years-old but looks like she is 20



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Round and Round part 21


Round and Round part 21
By
Morpheus

After David is caught at the wrong place at the wrong time, his entire life changes in ways he never could have expected. This is a fan fiction taking place in the Whateley Universe.



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The Princess and the Plague : 5

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The Princess and the Plague
(Life after Camp Kumoni)

By Anistasia Allread
Edited by Nick B

Flashbacks of the lake at camp erupted before his eyes as water enveloped his head and torso. He flailed about and came up sputtering.

     

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Fine Tuning

“… Cymru, yng Nghaerdydd; thank you for listening to Noson Werin, presented by myself, Siw Williams, with this evening’s guest the multi-instrumentalist Chrissy Morgan, who will be performing next Wednesday in St David’s Hall, Cardiff. This has been a Tidewave production for BBC Wales in Cardiff”

I waited till the ‘on air’ light was out, and confirmation from our producer, before I turned back to Chrissy, who was now encumbered with several instrument cases.

“How do you think that went?”



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Abrupt Change ch.30. The end.

Abrupt Change
Chapter 30 Final
An original story by Lajien
Edited by Julia Miller


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Abrupt Change ch.19

Abrupt Change
Chapter 19
An original story by Lajien
Edited by Julia Miller


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Oh, mommy is going to be so upset with me when i get home from school!!! Part 3

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Oh, mommy is going to be so upset when I get home from school
Part 3

(All I added a couple of the last paragraph’s from Part 2 so the reading goes a little smoother. Hope you enjoy! Hugs Princess)

I watch as Miley puts her hand over her mouth giggling as she stares at me smiling from ear-to-ear. “Okay sweetie you are done just like your big sister.” Oh that is good as I smile knowing I am done too at the same time as Miley.



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