As promised, Naci Rema's rewriting of the story with her take on events if they happened in the US, and with her own twist on things.
Dare I ask which version you prefer, no rude or over critical comments please, both versions were written for fun, not for a Booker prize. Enjoy!! :)

Terry’s Story

CHAPTER 26
We weren't learning some mad form of instant death to our enemies, just some basic moves to break out of someone's grip and discourage them from trying to get another one. Above all, what Tom was trying to teach us was observation and awareness. He was forever saying “What is wrong with this picture?”

Listen as the girls sing three of their new hits off their CD, Multiple Chances: Gee Mom; Gosh Dad...We Didn't Know You Were Home...Yeah..What Are We Doin' In Connie's Closet...uh...emmmm

By Jillian

Chapter Eleven

Tanya was roused by the sound of the telephone ringing. She slowly became conscious enough to reach over to her bedside table and answer it, “Hello?”

“Why are you still asleep, bitch?” Cynthia’s sarcastic yet far too cheery voice berated her friend.

Grinning to herself, Tanya answered, “Well I did work last night.”

“Yeah? Well you were supposed to meet me at my place for breakfast, or had you forgotten?”

This s the trial. It necessarily rehashes a lot of the unpleasantness of earlier chapters, but it is drier, less direct. Please read with caution, though.

It's Only Grief

You come up to me
Say “Why so sad?
You look so glum
you must feel bad”

Coming Out
By
Samantha Michelle Davies (SamanthaMD)

[A Comprehensive School somewhere in England in the late 1960's]

We all filed in the classroom and sat down.
The teacher came in and began to call the register.
Eventually my name came round
“Thomas Parker”
“Yes Miss Greenhough”

With the register over, the lesson began. This was the bit I was dreading. Getting my homework results.

CHAPTER 23
And so it went, day by day and night by night. Em’s parents, Barbara and Peter, started coming round to the house, at first to make sure their daughter wasn’t in some vice den, which she was, in a way, and their initial take on our cuddling was a little off.

This chapter deals maily with Jalina's ascent from the grinding despair of transgenderism in the Kolkata hijra community and her restoration to her former position.

The rescue 5

Characters.
Beverly Taff. Transvestite
James or Jamie Transgendered kid.
Candice Jamie’s Younger Sister.
Sergeant Williams Hate crime police officer
David Evans Knife-boy. (Son of Dewi Evans.)
Margaret Beckinsale. Jamie and Candice’s mum. (AKA Madge.)
Sandie Beverly’s best Transvestite friend.
Elizabeth Todd Beverly’s next door neighbour.

Ummmm,... Do You Love Me?

I'm fairly sure of your answer.
Just the prospect of it completely freaks me out!

I've been dreading the answer to that question since I was born.
Even though I didn't realize the question had to be asked.

I do Love You.
I Always Will!!!

Forever and Always,
Your Jonelle

CHAPTER 21
Brian was almost hyperventilating, and for an instant the news...eleven bodies…then I saw his excitement, and I realised that it was nothing like that, nothing at all.

Dear Mom,By Jonelle-Elise copyright 2011

It just seemed easier that way. It's not quite that easy with you. You're still here; actually you're right here under my roof!

That doesn't seem to matter.
You're my Mom.
That seems to carry more weight than it should.

I'm your caretaker now.
I know you don't like that;
Neither do I.

I'm not sure I can handle it.

Galactic Marshal II
by
Hilltopper

CHAPTER 14

“What do you mean?”

“A representative of The Alliance is taking us to dinner at the resort. You need to look sexy, kitten.”

On Hallowe’en, Danny goes to school dressed as a Gothic princess.

CHAPTER 19
There were so many things going on just then, things I didn’t see or know about till it was all over, or very nearly. What I was involved with was my healing, or healing as much as I was able.